"Sis! Sis! Look! I broke the world record for opening the most bottles of beer in a minute!" Natasha ignored her brother's crazy remarks about some sort of records and stuffed her feet in her dark, black, plain shoes. She pushed her cap on her head and walked out, embracing California's sunshine.
"Why am I stuck with such an obnoxious, crazy, stupid and idiotic brother?"Natasha walked down the crowded streets, ranting on and on about how annoying her brother is under her breath. Her anger increased as people shoved in the crowd. She clenched her fists to calm her self down.
"Yo, Natasha! Wait up." Natasha's face brightened immeasurably as her friend ran up to her. Her friend's name is Wylie. He has gentle waves on his chestnut colored hair and always adorns himself with a golden cross, simple but stylish at the same time. They walked together with a vivacious air around them, chattering in a speed which even made people wonder if they were speed-debating. They arrived at the gate of the famed McCarthy International Private Middle School. The majestic, grand gates opened. They separated from each other unwillingly, stealing glimpses of each other while moving apart. She opened her red locker and stuffed her bag in.
First class was History. Professor Ludwick, with his posh looking hair and a old looking suit, started to teach the customs of the Incas. A few kids snickered as his glasses slipped down. Natasha gritted her teeth as he moved on to describe the theories related to Incas. Why to teachers here always lecture?
Then something weird happened. The school started to vibrate violently. Books fell, lights cracked and Professor Ludwick started to scream like a girl. Then a strong force pressurized our minds, which caused everybody to faint.
Natasha blinked her brown, Bambi-like eyes. She stood up and looked around. Books were on the ground, a few iPod screens shattered and there was a stack of students at the side, topped with Professor Ludwick. She saw Cody the class clown dig himself out of the stack. Tina threw a bunch of kids to breathe. She saw Thomas shaking his head.She calmed down, telling herself that everything was okay. Then the boys started to run.
Natasha was quite puzzled. All of the boys ran to the flower garden and picked flowers. Even the kid who had flower allergies picked flowers, although he was doubling over with coughs. Natasha stared in shock as the boys ran back to the classroom. The boys got on to their knees and proposed in unison.
"Will you be my girlfriend?"
At that moment, Natasha found out that the boy's eyes were purple. She sensed that something was wrong. Then she replayed what happed before the proposals. The force. She grasped her head in a way as if she was trying to figure something out. Here comes the part when she really freaked out.
Natasha felt a tap on her back. She turned and found Wylie kneeling and holding a banquet of tulips. Then the bomb exploded.
"Will you marry me?"
Natasha was shocked and became silent for a minute. Here was Wylie, her best friend who already
had a girlfriend proposing to her. Her face turned red. Not the blushing red but the angry red. She slapped Wylie squarely in the face and walked away.
had a girlfriend proposing to her. Her face turned red. Not the blushing red but the angry red. She slapped Wylie squarely in the face and walked away.
Natasha heard a whizzing sound. She sneaked out of the classroom and followed the sound. She arrived infront of the Hall Clock and noticed that the Hall clock's hands were spinning out of control.
Panicking, she ran through all the classrooms on the first floor. All clocks were spinning. She ran to her home and found her clocks spinning.
She sat down on her couch and wrote down every single thing which happened from the morning. Then she snapped her fingers.
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ReplyDeleteI think that your story was great! It was really descriptive. I personally enjoyed the first ending.
It was really fun!
-Claire-
I find your story difficult to read because of the color of the font and its structure; the width of the paragraphs is narrow and the font color is too similar with the color of the background. Fixing these issues would make this much better.
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